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RE:Percy Jackson
The main story is Percy, a unusual young boy, has many odd and weird experiences. One day, he went to a museum for school trip and there, he watched his math teacher who doesn’t like him so much changed to a terrible monster that looks like a devil. As soon as she changed, she attacked him fiercely. Percy defeated her with a weird pen on impulse. Upon the opportunity, he recognized he was the son between Poseidon and a human woman. And he was framed that he had stolen Zeus’ lightening. To clear himself of the false charge, he has to meet Zeus and he starts going the ancient Greek temple with two friends. his one friend has the duty that is he has to save Percy and the other friend, daughter of Athena, met in the camp where has many special half god like Percy Jackson. While going to the temple to meet Zeus, they faced three devils and they defeated them. One is Medusa. They meet her and they have some little trouble and they repulsed her with back mirror from his car like the story of Medusa. Another one is Hydra. Hydra is a hound has three big heads. Percy and his friends went to the temple of Parthenon and got pearl from stone statue of Athena. There, they meet hydra. But they can repulse hydra easily by using Medusa’s sheared head. The other one is pleasure. Percy went to casino and they drug and devote themselves to pleasure. But Percy finds himself and they can go out from there. And when they went to hell, the can realize it is Hades’ plot. they take away the lightening from Hades and they meet Zeus. To Zeus, they explain everything and return lightening to him. ppercy also meets his father, Poseidon who is proud of his son so much. So Percy and his friends come back to camp and they keep training. Actuall, Percy jackson was an amazing fantasy for me. Because i have read this kind of novel that’s why i like this novel and especially, finally, When Percy met his father, i nearly cried. it impressed me and i think aim going to read this book for many times.
The main story is about Percy, an unusual young boy, who has many odd and weird experiences. One day, he went to a museum (for)on a school trip, and there he watched his math teacher,who doesn't like him so much, change(d) into a terrible monster, that look(s)ed like a devil. As soon as she changed, she attacked him fiercely. Percy defeated her on impulse,with a weird pen. (Upon the opportunity) At this moment, he recognized that he was the son of (between) Poseidon and a human woman. He was also (framed that he had stolen) accused of stealing Zeus’ light(e)ning. To clear himself of the false charge, he ha(s)d to meet Zeus, and he (starts) goes(ing) to the ancient Greek temple with two friends. (his one friend) One of his friends has the (duty that is he has to save) task of protecting Percy, and the other friend,is the daughter of Athena, who he met in the camp where (has) there are many special half gods like Percy Jackson. While going to the temple to meet Zeus, they faced three devils and they defeated them. One (is) was Medusa. They (meet) faced her and they ha(ve)d some (little) trouble and they (repulsed) repelled her (with) back with a mirror from his car like in the story of Medusa. Another one (is) was The Hydra. The Hydra (is)was a hound which ha(s)d three big heads. Percy and his friends went to the temple of Parthenon and got a pearl from a stone statue of Athena. There, they (meet) faced The Hydra, but they (can repulse) repelled The Hydra easily by using Medusa’s (sheared) severed head. The other part (one) is pleasur(e)able. Percy went to a casino and they took a drug and devoted (themselves) himself to pleasure. (But Percy finds himself???) and they (can) go out (from there). (And) When they went to hell, they (can) realized it (is) was Hades’ plot. They take away the light(e)ning from Hades and they meet Zeus. They explain everything to Zeus,and return the lightening to him. Percy also meets his father, Poseidon who is so proud of his son (so much). So Percy and his friends (come) go back to camp and they keep training. Actually, Percy Jackson's story was an amazing fantasy for me, because i have read this kind of novel and that’s why i like this novel,and especially, finally, when Percy met his father, i nearly cried. it impressed me and i think I am going to read this book (for) many times.
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