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RE:A North Korean

trevor | 2014.11.26 18:03 | 조회 3719

Good morning, everyone! Just short time ago, i watched a short video that made many people impressed. In the video, main character was a very very normal 19 years old girl. She had been invited to ‘2014 Dublin One Young World Summit’ in which many famous people attended. There, she told about her country, North Korea, and how she could escape from her horrors of life under Kim Jung-ill. And today, i am going talk about her story   impressed me. 



Good morning everyone! Just a short time ago, i watched a short video that (made many people) impressed many people. In the video, the main character was a (very very) normal 19 year(s) old girl. She had been invited to the '2014 Dublin One Young World Summit’ (in) which many famous people attended. There, she (told)talked about her country, North Korea, and how she (could) wants to/would like to escape from (her) the horrors of life under Kim Jung-ill. (And) today, i am going to talk about her story, which impressed me. 




Told us about , or talked about, but not told about.

Could is used for possibility or ability.

Don't begin a sentence with 'And'

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