Hello :)

My name is Joshua, and I'm new here.

How are you? Im so glad to meet you:D

I'm a university student in Korea, and now I'm preparing to study abroad, specifically to the graduate school in USA.

So...I want to have my SOPs and some essays get reviwed.

Actually, I will not send you a whole SOP, and I will not request correction service on technical parts of my essay.

What I am going to ask for a help is, just a grammatical correction to be more formal writing:

about correcting grammatical error, remove unnecessary verbiage, replace unusual expression to more appropriate one, etc.

I sometime copy and paste several sentences or paragraph from my SOP or essay here, usually as a Word file for your convenience regarding correction work.

Then you may proofread it.

Here is my fisrt request. Please see the attached Word file.

Remember: There will be almost no technical parts! All I want to do is to make my writing be more formal and suitable to graduate school application. Being concise, containing no grammatical errors, removing unusual or wordy expressions, etc

Thank you for the help.

Best regards,

Kwhangho Joshua Kim

p.s. If there are sentences that are ambiguous for you, just give some marks and leave them.

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