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광토87 | 2012.12.13 10:56 | 조회 2312

Hello, teacher trevor.

Always thank you for your work.

 

(1)

 

(This is my explanation for extenuating circumstance potentially affecting my application.)

In KSA, I could take several first-year university courses at KAIST that would officially transfer to my university transcript later. In the transcript, you can see several subjects under ‘credits transferred’, and those courses are what I transferred from KSA. I took 'Calculus 2' (College Calculus) when I was a high school freshman, and took 'Calculus 3' (Vector Calculus) when I was a high school sophomore. I should take those math courses with ordinary KAIST students during summer vacation. Thus, please consider the circumstances that when I got B+ on 'Calculus 2', I was only the freshman in high school and I had to compete with the most excellent college students in Korea. Furthermore, I also had to participate in my research program at the same time. However, I understood all concepts and theories without great difficulty. And I have received many A+'s in many mathematics courses including 'Analysis 1' (A+; more advanced course than Calculus 2).

 

 


(2)

I want to use an expression 'the lens of truth' or 'the eyes of truth' to describe the tools or ability to find[detect] hidden facts or truth of the world. Are those invalid expression? Do people normally not use those expression? Could you please suggest any other idioms or figurative expressions?

 

(3)

When we realized where we were, we were already deep in dark labyrinth. From that time on, I and my family had to go through the labyrinth of twisting lanes only staring at an indistinct light in the distance. The light was obscured by a thick veil of haze therefore we hardly could see it.

 

(4)

It taught me that even though I could not afford to help other people materially with money, there was still something valuable that I could do for others.

 

 

(5)

During my individual research, I enjoyed reading papers on a wide range of topics from Prof. Samuel Kou. His insight and broad interests on statistics attracted me. There is Prof. Stephen Blyth who has had a big impact on my life. His academic articles as well as his career in the HMC really impressed me.

 

Thanks.

 

Kwhangho Kim

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