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1. What is your day?
Even though It was holiday, me and my girldfriend went to public liberary to study on weekend. So I had to get up early this morning. It was so cold the outside. It makes me feel that I was not willing to go out. I first went to her home in order to give her ride on my way to the liberary. I parked my car in paring area. Then we went in free studyroom. This pot was croeded with so many peope who wanted to study in there.
2. What are something you do to stay healty?
In order to keep healthy condition in body, We have try to eat good food witch consists of natural ingredience such as vegitables and fruits. Most of all, I work out at gym near my home. It takes me only 1 hour to be finished working out. I want to keep healthy mind. Therefore I try to find time for hobby. It help reduce my stress from work place.
3. What does being healthy mean to you? what do healty people usaually do?
Keeping the healthy body and mind is very important for me. If not, We cannot do anything I want. Some of the peoople in the hospital regreted not to keeping healthy condition themselves. As you may know the wonderful word. "we can earn lots of money, But when you loss your physical Health and helthy mind, You lost everything."
Healthy people work out for at least 1 hour everyday and stay away from smking and drinking. Most of all, It is neccessory to go to bed before 10 o"Clock pm. It makes people heal body during the sleeping.
4. Tell me about your healthy person you met. How did he or she affect you?
The healtist peoson I have ever met is my co-worker who works with me. His name is Young Un He never keep the blackfast including other eating time and also He stays away from drinking. He only drink a healrlthy beverage. When get home from work, He go to the gym to work out. Most of All, He always greet all people and waves. That is the reason that he can keep a healthy mind. I try to resemble him. He had great impect on me.
1. How is your day?
Even though It was a holiday, me and my girlfriend went to the public library to study on the weekend. So I had to get up early this morning. It was so cold outside. It made me feel like not going out. I first went to her house in order to give her a ride on our way to the library. I parked my car in the parking area. Then we went into the free study room. This part was crowded with so many people who wanted to study.
2. What is something you do to stay healthy?
In order to keep healthy, we have to try to eat good food which consists of natural ingredients, such as vegetables and fruit. Most of the time, I work out at a gym near my home. It takes me only 1 hour finish working out. I want to keep a healthy mind, therefore I try to find time for a hobby. It helps reduce my stress from work.
3. What does being healthy mean to you? what do healthy people usually do?
Keeping a healthy body and mind is very important to me. If not, we cannot do anything we want. Some people in hospital regretted not keeping healthy. As you may know, the wonderful words. "we can earn lots of money, but when you lose your physical health and a healthy mind, you lose everything."
Healthy people work out for at least 1 hour everyday and stay away from smoking and drinking. Most of all, It is necessary to go to bed before 10pm. Sleeping heals the body.
4. Tell me about a healthy person you have met. How did he or she affect you?
The healthiest person I have ever met is my co-worker. His name is Young Un. He never misses breakfast and other meals and he doesn't drink alcohol, he only drinks healthy drinks. When he gets home from work, he goes to the gym to work out. Most of all, he always greets and waves to everyone he meets. That is the reason he has a healthy mind. I try to emulate him. He has had great impact on me.
Good work. Look at your sentences carefully, and look for meanings which are the same.
Even though It was holiday, me and my girldfriend went to public liberary to study on weekend. So I had to get up early this morning. It was so cold the outside. It makes me feel that I was not willing to go out. I first went to her home in order to give her ride on my way to the liberary. I parked my car in paring area. Then we went in free studyroom. This pot was croeded with so many peope who wanted to study in there.
2. What are something you do to stay healty?
In order to keep healthy condition in body, We have try to eat good food witch consists of natural ingredience such as vegitables and fruits. Most of all, I work out at gym near my home. It takes me only 1 hour to be finished working out. I want to keep healthy mind. Therefore I try to find time for hobby. It help reduce my stress from work place.
3. What does being healthy mean to you? what do healty people usaually do?
Keeping the healthy body and mind is very important for me. If not, We cannot do anything I want. Some of the peoople in the hospital regreted not to keeping healthy condition themselves. As you may know the wonderful word. "we can earn lots of money, But when you loss your physical Health and helthy mind, You lost everything."
Healthy people work out for at least 1 hour everyday and stay away from smking and drinking. Most of all, It is neccessory to go to bed before 10 o"Clock pm. It makes people heal body during the sleeping.
4. Tell me about your healthy person you met. How did he or she affect you?
The healtist peoson I have ever met is my co-worker who works with me. His name is Young Un He never keep the blackfast including other eating time and also He stays away from drinking. He only drink a healrlthy beverage. When get home from work, He go to the gym to work out. Most of All, He always greet all people and waves. That is the reason that he can keep a healthy mind. I try to resemble him. He had great impect on me.
1. How is your day?
Even though It was a holiday, me and my girlfriend went to the public library to study on the weekend. So I had to get up early this morning. It was so cold outside. It made me feel like not going out. I first went to her house in order to give her a ride on our way to the library. I parked my car in the parking area. Then we went into the free study room. This part was crowded with so many people who wanted to study.
2. What is something you do to stay healthy?
In order to keep healthy, we have to try to eat good food which consists of natural ingredients, such as vegetables and fruit. Most of the time, I work out at a gym near my home. It takes me only 1 hour finish working out. I want to keep a healthy mind, therefore I try to find time for a hobby. It helps reduce my stress from work.
3. What does being healthy mean to you? what do healthy people usually do?
Keeping a healthy body and mind is very important to me. If not, we cannot do anything we want. Some people in hospital regretted not keeping healthy. As you may know, the wonderful words. "we can earn lots of money, but when you lose your physical health and a healthy mind, you lose everything."
Healthy people work out for at least 1 hour everyday and stay away from smoking and drinking. Most of all, It is necessary to go to bed before 10pm. Sleeping heals the body.
4. Tell me about a healthy person you have met. How did he or she affect you?
The healthiest person I have ever met is my co-worker. His name is Young Un. He never misses breakfast and other meals and he doesn't drink alcohol, he only drinks healthy drinks. When he gets home from work, he goes to the gym to work out. Most of all, he always greets and waves to everyone he meets. That is the reason he has a healthy mind. I try to emulate him. He has had great impact on me.
Good work. Look at your sentences carefully, and look for meanings which are the same.
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151 | RE:RE:thank you. | Nic | 2637 | 2013.01.07 20:36 |
150 | I want to move to other comapny. | Nic | 2631 | 2013.01.05 11:35 |
149 | RE:I want to move to other comapny. | trevor | 2469 | 2013.01.05 16:29 |
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147 | live on the third floor of the apartment | Nic | 2482 | 2013.01.04 21:25 |
146 | RE:live on the third floor of the apartm | trevor | 2709 | 2013.01.05 07:38 |
145 | I want to be a person who has good engli | Nic | 2968 | 2013.01.03 19:47 |
144 | RE:I want to be a person who has good en | trevor | 2989 | 2013.01.04 03:32 |
143 | People can enjoy more time for leisure a | Wonwoo | 6842 | 2013.01.03 17:33 |
142 | RE:People can enjoy more time for leisur | trevor | 4076 | 2013.01.04 03:13 |