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RE:I want to be a person who has good english communication skill.

trevor | 2013.01.04 03:32 | 조회 2989

1. How was your day?

Iam so tired. I had a headache and runny nose. When I was about to come home, I went to see a doctor and took prescription from a pharmacist. After having a good diner and then I took medicine at home. at this time. I felt that It is very important to keep good condition in body. It was very chilly and cloudy today. According to weather forcast, It would keep chilly and getting cold through this month. Iam concerned about my condition. When I get up early tomorrow, My condition will be good.

 

2. Let's talk about household chores. Who is responsible for each household chore?

My family takes the lead and take household chores. I get home from work and I take out my garbage. Sometime I wash a dishes on the sink. When I do that, My mother are very happy and praises to me. My father used to wash a car in the parking area, when he is on the weekend. I don't like take out food wast. because It smells bad and makes me feel vomit. But my mom are always in charge of doing food wast. I respect her. I try to help her by cleaning my room and living room. Moreover I sometimes buy some fresh fruit such as oranges, apples and bananas for family on my way home.

 

3. Let's talk about your family vacations. What do you do on holidays? Where do you go?

When my family have a vacation on weekend, We travel to famous spot in korea. Every vacation we get, We find a tourist attraction through internet and then We leave to home. We like spending vacation time visiting lots of the great attration such as temple, amusement park and museum. They don’t like stay at home. We anytime communicate with each other. last travel was only month ago. we went to Kyung Ju. Kyung Ju is the one of the three kingdom in SiLRa a long time ago. it has practical and educational city. my family will not forget this tour forever.

 

4. Can you describe your home?

I live in a house with my family. It is a house which has 2 room, a bathroom and living room. When you walk in, you can first see the living room. There are a sofa, a big table which many fruits are on and television. We spend free time together in it. next to it, you can see a study room which has lots of books and a desk. I used to study and do homework at there. there are nothing which can irritate me from noisy. when married, I want to have a detached house with my wife. It costs me lots of money.



1. How was your day?

I am so tired. I had a headache and runny nose. When I was about to go home, I went to see a doctor and took a prescription to a pharmacist. After having a good diner,I took medicine at home. At this time, I felt that It was very important to keep in good condition. It was a very chilly and cloudy today. According to the weather forcast, It will stay chilly and cold throughout this month. I am concerned about my condition. When I get up early tomorrow, My condition will be better.

 

2. Let's talk about household chores. Who is responsible for each household chore?

My family takes the lead and does the household chores. I get home from work and I take out my garbage. Sometimes I wash the dishes in the sink. When I do that, my mother is very happy and praises me. My father usually washes his car in the parking area,at/on the weekends. I don't like to  take out food waste, because It smells bad and makes me feel like vomiting. But my mom is always in charge of doing the food waste. I respect her. I try to help her by cleaning my room and the living room. Moreover, I sometimes buy some fresh fruit, such as oranges, apples and bananas for my family on my way home.

 

3. Let's talk about your family vacations. What do you do on holidays? Where do you go?

When my family have a vacation on weekends, we travel to famous spots in korea. Every vacation we get, we find a tourist attraction through the internet, and we go there. We like spending our vacation time visiting lots of the great attrations such as temples, amusement parks and museums. We don't like to stay at home. We always communicate with each other. Our last trip was only 1 month ago. we went to Kyung Ju. Kyung Ju was one of the three kingdoms in SiLRa a long time ago. It is a practical? and educational city. my family will never forget this tour.

 

4. Can you describe your home?

I live in a house with my family. It is a house which has 2 rooms,(what type of rooms?) a bathroom and living room. When you walk in, you can first see the living room. There is a sofa, a big table with a television and a lot of fruit on it. We spend our free time together in it. Next to it, there is a study room which has lots of books and a desk. I used to study and do my homework there. There is no noise to distract or irritate me. When married, me and my wife want to have a detached house. It will cost me lots of money.


Better. Please work on your plurals. Many vacations, not 1 vacation.  amusement parks, temples museums.

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