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RE:I had injury my lips.
1, How was your day?
I had a terrible day. I almost had a serious accident. In this afternoon, I was working in the construction site. I missed a big bolt in front of me. When standing up, I ran my mouth into a bolt. I screamed laud. coworkers who are working around me looked at me. My lips was blooding and I felt a severe pain. I stoped working at this point. I reported my condition to a supervisor. He told me that You have to be hurry, You need to go to a hospital and check you tooth. He was worried about me. Fortunately, My tooth was not damaged, I just took a ointment. I could came to home more quickly then before. There was enough time to do anything today. So I took a guitar from my bag. I learned how to play the guitar. I have learn a favorite song called “Don’t closs your legs“ This song has funny lyrics. If I get a chance to show music performance, I will play the guitar for you.
2. What kind of music do you like?
my favorite music type is Pop song. I first liked the pop song when I wan is middle school. My english teacher prepared duplicate of some pop song and thought how to sing a sing for students. The song called “My heart will go on“ I first learned from her. It was a famous movie original sound track in the Titanic. this movie was gave lots of love all around the world. Of course, It was hard to sing a song and memorize words. Not only did I like pop song but also I used to sing some pop song on my way home. sometimes I go to the karaoki to sing a song with my friends. Most of mine choose a k-pop but Iam not. We have not a lot in common. some friends want me to sing a korean song, But I refuse to sing it. I really like Pop song. If I go to the america, I wll meet good singer whose name is 4 non blondes band. this singer sang good song which many people can remember including “what’s up“
3. Describe your lately abroad tour.
One of my first trip to abroad the most lately is Thai land. I will never forget this nation. It knows well as good tour nation. Thailand is a tropical country with incredible beaches. since tourism in Thailand is well developed, There are various kinds of accommodation there. you acn choose from resorts, hotel and guesthouses. Thailand is a great place for every body: families, cuples or single people. Thai people are very kind and welcoming. When you need to ask for direction to thai people, They give a direction or map for you. thai people are willing to hele you.
1, How was your day? 2. What kind of music do you like? 3. Describe your latest tour abroad. One of my first trips abroad recently was to Thailand. I will never forget this country. It is a well known tourist country. Thailand is a tropical country with incredible beaches. Since tourism in Thailand is well developed, there are various kinds of accommodation there. You can choose from resorts, hotels and guesthouses. Thailand is a great place for everybody: families, couples or single people. Thai people are very kind and welcoming. When you need to ask for directions from Thai people, they give you directions or a map. Thai people are always willing to help you.
I had a terrible day. I almost had a serious accident this afternoon, while I was working on the construction site. I didn't see a big bolt in front of me when standing up and I walked right into it.It caught me in the mouth and I screamed out loud. My coworkers, who were working around me, looked at me. My lips were bleeding and the pain was severe. I stopped working at this point and reported to a supervisor. He told me to go to hospital immediately and have my teeth checked. He was worried about me, but fortunately, my teeth were not damaged, I just got ointment then I went straight home. There wasn't enough time to do anything today, so I took a guitar from my bag and began to practice. I have learnt one of my favorite songs called “Don’t cross your legs“ This song has funny lyrics. If I get a chance to do a performance, I will play the guitar for you.
My favorite type of music is pop music. I first liked pop songs when I was is middle school. My English teacher prepared copies of some pop songs to sing for the students. The song called “My heart will go on“ I first learned from her. It is the original sound track of the famous movie 'Titanic'. This movie generated lots of love all around the world. Of course, It was hard to sing a song and memorize the words. Not only did I like pop songs, but also I used to sing some pop songs on my way home. Sometimes I go to the karaoke to sing with my friends. Most of them choose k -pop but I don't. We don't have a lot in common. Some friends want me to sing Korean songs, but I refuse to sing them. I really like Pop songs. If I go to America, I will meet a good singer from the band 4 non blondes. This singer sang good songs which many people remember including “what’s up“
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161 | hellow. | Nic | 2565 | 2013.01.10 20:46 |
160 | RE:hellow. | trevor | 2570 | 2013.01.12 10:26 |
159 | I had injury my lips. | Nic | 2157 | 2013.01.09 21:53 |
>> | RE:I had injury my lips. | trevor | 2287 | 2013.01.11 07:22 |
157 | the Opic test is coming | Nic | 2413 | 2013.01.08 21:27 |
156 | RE:the Opic test is coming | trevor | 2700 | 2013.01.09 07:47 |
155 | Time flows like an arrow | Nic | 2673 | 2013.01.07 21:46 |
154 | RE:Time flows like an arrow | trevor | 2708 | 2013.01.08 08:40 |
153 | thank you. | Nic | 2742 | 2013.01.06 21:23 |
152 | RE:thank you. | trevor | 2729 | 2013.01.07 07:57 |