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the Opic test is coming

Nic | 2013.01.08 21:27 | 조회 2412

Hi. Mr. Trevor. First of all I have a question before I have a practice in writing english. I think that The sentence you already corrected has a problem. It is your sentence that “There were a few people there washing” Is this a corrected sentence? I think that It has a error. can you tell me why it is corrected sentence?

 

1 What do you do before you watch a movie or after?
When movie starts, I buy some to eat while watching movie such as popcorn and soda and then I see some review for the movie which I will see soon thought internet by using a mobile phone. sometimes I go to coffee shop and drink a cup of coffee while seating on the bench at patio. After movie finished, I talk to my friends about the movie which we already saw. That then we comment our review on the online. We share our thinking among lovers of korean film. When I arrive my home, I attach my movie ticket on the notebook and take note our emotion which I felt something during the movie.

 

2. Can you tell me where you visit the most beautiful city?
One of the memorable cities is Ulsan, which I live in. Do you want to see fantastic scenery? try to visit there. It has a wide variety famous bench such as IL SAN beach and JONG JA beach. you can taste seafoods on the beach. most of all, this city is very famous as a whale and a dolphin. It has a whale museum in Jang Sang Po. some wheal bones and fossils are displayed at now. The high right of the museum is the Dolphin show. Most of the people visit and watch this show. They were touched by it and stirs their mind. I strongly recommend Ulsan city to you.

 

3. Describe your nation season.
As you may know, Korea has beautiful seasons. It has spring, summer, fall and winter. We have various activities during each season. We can go on a picnic in the spring and see green lawns on the ground. in the summer, We can go beach and play in the water, take some activities such scuba diving and snorkeling. Moreover we can reading a book seating on the bench surrounded fallen leaves and go skiing in the winter. I really happy as our nation has 4 season which other country don’t have.

 

4. Do you like to cook foods and why?
I like cooking foods and have my friends taste at my home. Iam interested in Delicious food. When I go out at famous restaurant, I used to close my eyes and thinking of ingredients that consists of foods. I feel like cooking for my parent. I just like making some foods. because I can do something for someone and give them my food. I try to emulate food that a experienced cook makes on my own. When I go to the book store, I go to food section and I scan a book related to food.

 

 

 

 

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161 hellow. Nic 2565 2013.01.10 20:46
160 답글 RE:hellow. trevor 2570 2013.01.12 10:26
159 I had injury my lips. Nic 2157 2013.01.09 21:53
158 답글 RE:I had injury my lips. trevor 2286 2013.01.11 07:22
>> the Opic test is coming Nic 2413 2013.01.08 21:27
156 답글 RE:the Opic test is coming trevor 2700 2013.01.09 07:47
155 Time flows like an arrow Nic 2673 2013.01.07 21:46
154 답글 RE:Time flows like an arrow trevor 2708 2013.01.08 08:40
153 thank you. Nic 2742 2013.01.06 21:23
152 답글 RE:thank you. trevor 2729 2013.01.07 07:57