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RE:Progress is always good?
It is often said that progress is not
always good for some cases. When it comes to the statement that making
development is an invariable virtue, I strongly agree. This is because society has
improved thanks to social progress, and because scientific progress has led to
people living longer.
Firstly, if it were not for social
progress, we could not live in this society which every member has right to be
respected. So to speak, progresses in areas like women’s rights, racial
equality have resulted in people happier and more fulfilled lives. Before women
have right to be treated as equally as men, they suffered from discriminations
in their families and groups regarded as not suitable for women.
African-American also underwent severe injustices until they got the same right
as white people in The US have. Social progress has given the disadvantaged
indisputable right to live like other people. As a result, social progress has
achieved society where all the people can live without unfair and enjoy their
freedom which can lead to their quality lives.
In addition, people can live longer than in
the past due to scientific development. To explain, medical developments like the
polio vaccine, antibiotics and AIDS prevention have contributed to longer life
expectancies. Before these managements of diseases, a number of infants died
and many people could not live longer. However, headway in natural science
found out cures for these maladies. Accordingly, people can have right to live
like decent human being under given minimum standard of life and can enjoy
their lives more because of life extension at this time.
In consideration of this, making step
forwards in mankind history has brought about fair society as well as extended
human life expectancies. In this respect, I think that progress is beneficial
as ever.
It is often said that progress is not always good in some cases. When it comes to the statement that development is an invariable virtue, I strongly agree. This is because society has improved thanks to social progress, and because scientific progress has led to people living longer. Firstly, if it were not for social progress, we could not live in societies in which every member has the right to be respected. So to speak, progress in areas like women’s rights, and racial equality have resulted in happier people,with more fulfilled lives. Before women gained the right to be treated equally to men, they suffered from discrimination in their families, and were barred from groups regarded as not suitable for women. African-Americans also underwent severe injustices until they got the same rights as white people in The US. Social progress has given the disadvantaged the indisputable right to live as equals to other people. As a result, social progress has produced a society where all people can live without unfair treatment, and can enjoy their freedom which in turn, leads to improved quality of lives. In addition, people live longer than before, due to scientific development. To explain, medical developments like the polio vaccine, antibiotics and AIDS prevention, have contributed to longer life expectancy. Before the management of diseases, many infants died and many people did not live long. However, headway in natural science has found cures for these maladies. Accordingly, people can now live ordinary lives within a minimum standard, and can enjoy their lives more because of prolonged periods of life. In consideration of this, making steps forward in mankind's' history has brought about a fairer society as well as extended human life expectancy. In this respect, I think that progress is as beneficial as ever.
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