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RE:Student having more vacations?

trevor | 2013.02.08 08:34 | 조회 2847

Some people may argue that one long vacation should not be given to students. As for me, it is a better idea that students have long vacations each year. The reasons for this are that students often need more breaks because of cultural and religious activities, and that several vacations during the course of a year give students a chance for period of rest and relaxation.

 

To begin with, students have needs to spend longer vacation due to their cultural and religious activities. What I mean is that we have several important days in each year. In United States, Christmas, the Fourth of July and Thanksgiving are all special days which require vacations. Unfortunately, sometimes those days are overlapped with weekends. In that case, people, who are in long distance from the activities which they should partake, do not have enough time to go to the places of the activity in the right time. Students are easily exposed to that situation because there are many students staying far from their home for studying. This situation confines students’ desires to come back to their home to meet their families or do religious activities. If long vacation is given to students, they can get rid of stresses about using limited time. By doing so, they are able to do deeds which are suitable for the meaning of those days. It is a better thinking for families, communities, not only for students, because it makes lives of members in a society more colorful and feel sense of bond on that account.

 

On top of that, a handful of vacations will give students an opportunity for the time to rest and relax. In other words, students can take more trips and enjoy their lives if vacations are expanded. Even if they have summer vacation and winter vacation, but the climates of two seasons are getting harsher nowadays. Taking this into consideration, it is easy to predict that students do not have enough time to do what they want, because two main breaks function only as avoiding extreme weathers. However, if students have more vacations, they will have space in fall or spring which is the best weather to go out do outside activities. Accordingly, Students can afford to engage in more activities refreshing and relieving themselves. In turn, this will result in productivity of their studying after break.

 

On the whole, expanded vacations allow students to take part in activities requiring them to be a member in society, and to have a chance for relieving themselves. All things considered, I agree with the statement that students ought to have more vacations in a year than in the present.



Some people may argue that one long vacation should not be given to students. As for me, I think it is a better idea that students have long vacations each year. The reasons for this are that students often need more breaks because of cultural and religious activities, and that several vacations during the course of a year give students a chance for periods of rest and relaxation.

 

To begin with, students need to spend longer on vacation due to their cultural and religious activities. What I mean, is that we have several important days each year. In The United States, Christmas, the Fourth of July and Thanksgiving are all special days which require vacations. Unfortunately, sometimes those days are overlapped with weekends. In that case, people, who are long distances from the activities in which they partake, do not have enough time to get to, and to do those activities. Students are generally exposed to that situation because there are many students studying far from their homes. This situation restricts students’ desires to go back to their homes to see their families, or do religious activities. If long vacations are given to students, they don't have to worry about time limits. By doing so, they are able to do things which are related to those days. It is a better way of thinking for families, communities, and for students, because it makes the lives of members of the community more fulfilling, and they feel a sense of bonding.

 

On top of that, a handful of vacations will give students an opportunity to rest and relax. In other words, students can take more trips and enjoy their lives, if vacations are extended. Even though they have summer vacations and winter vacations, the climates of these two seasons are getting harsher nowadays. Taking this into consideration, it is easy to predict that students will not have enough time to do what they want, because the two main breaks function only to avoid extreme weather. However, if students have more vacations, they will have time in fall or spring, which is when the weather is at its best, to go out and do outside activities. Accordingly, students can afford to engage in more activities which refresh and revive them. In turn, this will result in increased productivity of study after their break.

 

On the whole, extended vacations allow students to take part in activities as part of their communities, and to have a chance to refresh themselves. All things considered, I agree with the statement that students ought to have more vacations in a year than at present.


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