Some people may argue that it is more recommendable to concentrate on one subject rather than to take many subjects. I, however, am against the idea that focusing on one subject is more helpful to students in many ways. This is because experiencing many areas is conducive to decide an individual’s career, and because it will be able to help students to gain more various experiences, enriching a person’s life.

First of all, it is more beneficial for students to try to study as many subjects as possible. What I mean is that, a list enabling an individual to choose his career will be widen by going through a variety of domains. Generally speaking, a multitude of students enter colleges without knowledge of their major. It would give rise to high possibility that their major might not be apt to their aptitude. By taking various classes, students are able to figure out which my favored fields are. Furthermore, they even can find their own strengths, weaknesses and talents. Let me take my own experience as an example, I chose a double-degree program, which specialized in international trade and business, in my college in search of a well-paid job. Unlike my expectation, international trade and business did not fit to my aptitude well. Fortunately, at the same time I was taking classes for my minor, which is international relations, and I felt fascinated in my minor. Eventually, I decided to go to a graduation school educating international affairs in place of finding a job regarding international trade. This implies that trial and error can be a guideline to find a person’s true aptitude.

In addition, getting experience from many areas catalyzes more colorful life. Namely, universities offer many courses which students can take advantage of. However, there are time and financial constraints that will not allow students to experience all the areas off-campus life. What is worse, after graduation people have to work during the day and lack time to broaden their perspective, and if possible, it requires much stamina than when they were in school. Colleges provide students with a lot of areas such as nature science, humanity, art, and even sports, and these are benefits that help students to can obtain a widened point of view, manifold hobbies, and good interpersonal skills needed in society. To illustrate; Steve jobs who was a former Apple CEO, took a class of chirography in his college life. Later, this played a crucial role in inventing his Mac computer in terms of designing letter from. This indicates that a trivial learning can be an indispensable asset for people in the future. Therefore, people will live more fulfilling lives given that there are a number of life experiences.

To sum up, Not only does taking many subjects play essential role in determining a person’s job, but it also can be good ingredients for colorful life. All things considered, I am in favor of idea that people should learn as many subjects as possible when in school.

Some people may argue that it is more recommendable to concentrate on one subject rather than to take many subjects. I, however, am against the idea in many ways,  that focusing on one subject is more helpful to students. This is because experiencing many subjects is conducive to deciding an individual’s career, and because it will also enable students to gain more experience, thereby enriching their lives.

First of all, it is more beneficial for students to try to study as many subjects as possible. What I mean is that, a list enabling an individual to choose his career will be widen by going through a variety of domains?. Generally speaking, a multitude of students enter colleges without any idea of their major. It  gives rise to a high possibility that their major might not be apt to their ability. By taking various classes, students are able to figure out which fields they favour. Furthermore, they can even find out their own strengths, weaknesses and talents. Let me take my own experience as an example, at my college, I chose a double-degree program, which specialized in international trade and business, in a search of well-paid jobs. Despite my expectations, I did not have the aptitude for international trade and business. Fortunately, at the same time I was taking classes for my minor, which is international relations, and I was fascinated by my minor. Eventually, I decided to go to a graduate school specializing in international affairs, instead of finding a job within international trade. The implication is that trial and error can be an effective guideline in finding a person’s true aptitude.

In addition, getting experience from many areas catalyzes a more colorful life. Namely, universities offer many courses which students can take advantage of. However, there are time and financial constraints that will not allow students to experience all the areas of off-campus life. What is worse, after graduation, people have to work during the day and lack the time to broaden their perspective, and  usually, it requires much more energy than when they were in school. Colleges provide students with a lot of areas such as nature, science, humanity, art, and even sports, and these are benefits that help students to obtain a wider perspective, manifold hobbies, and good interpersonal skills needed in society. To illustrate; Steve jobs who was a former Apple CEO, took a class of chirography during his college life. Later, this played a crucial role in his invention of the  Mac computer in terms of designing letter from?. This indicates that a trivial subject can be an indispensable asset for people in the future. Therefore, people will live more fulfilling lives given that they have a number of life experiences.

To sum up, Not only does taking many subjects play an essential role in determining a person’s job, but it can also be a good ingredient for a colorful life. All things considered, I am in favor of the idea that people should learn as many subjects as possible when in school.

Good work, but try not to complicate your sentences. Remember clear English is more important to the reader of your work that complicated words or phrases. Can you explain the 2 underlined sentences? I was not sure how to interpret them.

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