Some people may say that good-looking people deserve their physical beauty. However, I think that one should never judge a person by external appearances. The reasons for this are that people often cannot control their external appearances, and that there are more important things than a person’s external appearance.

To start with, they had no choice but to have lived with their appearances from birth in the case of unattractive people. To explain, they did not choose how their looking would be. Due to the external traits, unattractive people have often been judged harshly from childhood, even though they might be very kind and well-intentioned. In order to overcome this social prejudice, physically not attractive people have to put much effort to be treated differently. Thus, many unattractive people are diligent, hard-workers and good citizens. In the case of people having unappealing appearance, there is high possibility that they are not bad as much as they look like.

What is more, a person’s external appearance is not more significant than his/her character. Namely, a person’s personality is the most crucial thing about him/her. Only personality can shows one’s own life experience, whereas physical looking can be fabricated. How a person behaves, speaks and thinks is the only way to evaluate the reality of him/her. For example, we experience changing view of value to choose a spouse. Generally, young people think that a good looking is the most important standard to select a spouse. On the other hand, as people get older, they start to think a person’s character is the most significant factor to choose their life companion. External appearance is not as lasting as personality does, and good character even can make one’s spouse feel happy and comfortable for the lifetime. An inner side of a person far outweighs his/her outer appearance on this account.

To sum up, judging others by their appearances is misleading. This is because external appearances cannot represent a person’s character as well as the real value of physically unattractive people. In this regard, I strongly believe that we should not look at other people with bias according to their looking.

Some people may say that good-looking people deserve their physical beauty. However, I think that one should never judge a person by external appearances. The reasons for this are that people often cannot control their external appearances, and that there are more important things than a person’s external appearance.

To start with, they have no choice but to have to live with their appearance from birth, in the case of both attractive and unattractive people. To explain, people do not choose what they are going to look like. Due to external traits, unattractive people have often been judged harshly from childhood, even though they might be very kind and well-intentioned. In order to overcome this social prejudice, physically  unattractive people have to put in much more effort to be treated equally. Thus, many unattractive people are diligent, hard-workers and good citizens. For people having an unappealing appearance, there is a high possibility that they are not as bad as they look.

What is more, a person’s external appearance is no more significant than his/her character. Namely, a person’s personality is the most crucial thing about him/her. Only personality can show one’s true nature, whereas physical looks can be fabricated. How a person behaves, speaks and thinks is the only way to evaluate the genuineness of that person. For example, we experience changing views of value to choose a spouse. Generally, young people think that good-looks are the most important characteristics to select a spouse. On the other hand, as people get older, they start to think about a person’s character as the most significant factor to choose their life companion. External appearance is not as lasting as personality is, and good character can even make one’s spouse feel happy and comfortable for a lifetime. On this account, the inner side of a person far outweighs his/her outer appearance.

To sum up, judging others by their appearance is misleading. This is because external appearance cannot represent a person’s character as well as the real value of physically unattractive people?. In this regard, I strongly believe that we should not look at other people with a bias towards their looks.

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